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Ellie chain ava by Mappley
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Anything that is pixel made i love.
This ID is amazing.It has been made with alot of time put into it.Everything has pure detail,even the eyes and the little parts around the picture.

The bird gets me the most.Its detail is great.Even the eye looks great.The detail in the paper is also high.It is oblivious that this has had alot of work put into it.

All i can say to improve is the tail.It just doesnt seem to fit in with the picture. It seems a bit flat.

All in all i love this ID or pictre though, very eye catching it is!
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:icondemonroni:
Thanks for a critique :)
since you like pixels, you might like the whole picture i made (this ID is just the part of a bit bigger picture)
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and aw, waht's wrong with the tail? Can you be more specific, so that I wont repeat the same mistake in the future? :)

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I may have lost the battle, but i will winn the war.

It wasn’t my fault! I was under the imperious curse at the time…

~Heartbeat-less doctor
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^^

The tail seems to be flat compaired to the rest of the picture.The tail seems to have turned to side veiw compared to the rest. To stop this try and make the tail go up a little more. that MIGHT fix the problem^^

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lol
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:icondemonroni:
mm, you are right... I think it's couse the stripes, hmm?
Guinevere's stripes are shiny, they are not shaded/lightened, that is why the tail looks flat, rite? D:

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I may have lost the battle, but i will winn the war.

It wasn’t my fault! I was under the imperious curse at the time…

~Heartbeat-less doctor
:iconwolfeden:
I think so. My eyes are very good at the moment XD

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90% of teens today would die if Myspace had a system failure and was completely destroyed...If you are one of the 10% that would be laughing, copy and paste this to your signature.

lol
Ive died
:icondemonroni:
xDD

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I may have lost the battle, but i will winn the war.

It wasn’t my fault! I was under the imperious curse at the time…

~Heartbeat-less doctor

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